1.I met with Firat after he had transferred to my university, in 2004.
2.On the first day, I gave him a ride although I did not know him.
3.I felt bad for him because he was so shy to ask for a ride.
4.It took 3 months before we became close friends.
5.It could have not happen if I had ignore him at that day.
6.Since I came to the USA , we could not talk on the phone.
7.I can not communicate him unless he calls me.
8.I can visit him when I go back to Turkey.
9.I can not call him until he finishes his military service.
10.Despite the red tape, I can not send him any letter.
# 1 and 5: verb tense/form mistakes
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